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I'll tell you honestly, Alex, I'm kinda confused by the page. It seems straightforward, but when you look at the characters who suddenly appear out of nowhere and the stunted forward momentum between panels 2 and 3, it doesn't make sense. Panel 1 has the man with the apron by himself. In Panel 2, you now have a man running who seems to have come out of nowhere. Panel 3 has him taking one step more in his run and suddenly you have a police officer shooting at him from a standing position. Finally, the man is shot and there's now a second officer in front of the first, with the first officer now having switched the positioning of his legs. The man with the apron is moving in a fluid motion throughout, but it's like watching people teleport and time being played with in the balance of the images. Really like the art style, but the storytelling is confusing.

Steve Colle, Editor